Can You Feel Me?

When the other person should feel what your heart is giving. And they do.

I had a dream about you last night. Can you feel me?

My heart beats for you, as always. Can you ever truly see?

I breathe for you, but you know that. Our dreams, they collide.

And by nature's patience, we've come to love -- come to abide.

Was it you that performed that miracle of dreams that brought us true?

Or was it circumstance -- that meandering whim -- which brought me to you?

Whatever the cause, you are in my heart, in my soul... with my love.

With thankful eyes, I smile back at that angel -- that cupid -- the one who winked at us from above.

Author's Note

Simple, but I hope it means something to you.

Reviews

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

I can relate... when my sister died I often wondered if she could still see me, feel me and love me. Time was my healer, there was nothing more for me to do but wait until the deep sorrow I felt had subsided a bit. You may say this is a simple poem, but usually in simplicity is where you can a meaning (for the reader). The poems that have the big words and often showy are the ones that often go without meaning to the reader, for the poem was written for the person writing it. Your poem proves that you write for the public and this is a real gem. I enjoyed reading this and will come back and read it again from time to time. Thank you for sharing this with us. K

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

Amazing, simply amazing, I loved it. great work!

[Sel Whiteley]

Beautiful, this really captures the passion of the two souls united as one. Your questions make the poem even more engaging and flows wonderfully. I loved the line: 'circumstance -- that meandering whim --'

[deeps]

This is so beautiful and enjoyed this write.
Very romantic as well. enjoyable read

[razormuse]

a beautiful poem. has deep meaning, very easy to read and enjoy. i adore the flow of your verse and the way the poems take on visuals. look forward to reading more.

[turtlegirlluver]

This has a lot of deep meaning and emotions flowing through your words. I can relate to some of it and have found myself wondering some of the same things. I like the format as well, good job!

[Jamie S.]

Such a romantic, spiritual, butterflies in the stomach poem!! I love that feeling when i read, thank you!

-Jamie

[Sophie]

As soon as I read the first sentence, I got a feel for this poem (no pun intended).
It does mean something to me.
And, I also liked the simplicity. It made it easy to follow.
Great job; I really liked this unique and meaningful poem.

[gravitylava]

This is great; really brilliant work. It's not confusing or wordy, yet it is still beautiful. I loved it.
-michelle

[Voice11]

WoW totally an awesome visual with feelings..for me I see feelings in color and music...so I could steadliy see the differences in transition and the flow was amazing!!!