Cosmic Kind of Love

When you love beyond the stars and back again. But not sure if you're worth it.

Across my heart, you've traveled so reverently -- sojourned so far.

I've wished many a time, pondering upon many a bright, neighboring star.

I wish I may, I wish I might, be your star this sentimental and darkened night.

Let me shine eternal; let me be your vision -- and your desired sight.

As the meteoric showers of Perseus embrace time and space,

I dream to be your soulful entity gracing your being -- your face.

Is it too much to request your affections --  do I admire you too much?

Look down at me, I reach to you -- your hand I fervently do touch.

 

 

Author's Note

Just a little something.

Reviews

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

I think you got something here. Trying so hard to get the attention of someone who doesn't have the same feelings, or for someone who doesn't know you exist. Infactuation can fall in between Love and hate. So many people try to make true love, but it's not "trying" it's called what is. Forcing, loving, hating, seeing what it's doing to your heart, makes you want to go crazy, but it's all in your mind. The mind is powerful;it can make dreams come true but in the end, it was all in your mind. I believe that if you get the shun, move on. It's not worth the time you take to make it so... that's just my own thoughts. K

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Thank you all so very much for the wonderful comments. This particular poem wasn't written for anyone in particular, to be honest. I guess it's just that I believe in soulmates. Maybe I wrote it for that soulmate I have yet to meet. :-)

[Amanda Avalon]

Now THIS is what love should feel like! Reading this piece made me feel as if it's worth it to still have hope within your heart... I could only dream of finding a love such as this!

As the meteoric showers of Perseus embrace time and space

Oh, and I how I love the cosmic reference! I am big on astrology and astronomy, so anything I read about space (particularly, love that transcends space) captivates my soul.

Fabulous!

[Jamie S.]

Check you out being one of those sweet, sensitive guys that knows how to melt a girls heart!! Who ever your inspiration is should feel like a lucky lady!!! Great writing!!!


Jamie

[Sel Whiteley]

So beautiful, sensitively drawn with classic stunning imagery

[deeps]

Wow this wonderful and so beautiful

[MIA ST. PAUL]

the flow in this piece is great!. Once again very beautifully written, Made me smile and feel all dreamy and stuff....

Thanks for posting it.

Mia

[LovelyLise :D]

This is really good. It's not just a little something. It's a big something. Amazing is what I would call it(:

[BLACKCRUSH]

I don't think I've ever heard a poem so original and beautiful. It was like a melody . Outstanding.

[closed account]

a little something went a looooong way, this
hit a nerve in me,, thanks now I need a pain killer lol,,
no just kidding,, this was beautiful,,