Cosmic Kind of Love

When you love beyond the stars and back again. But not sure if you're worth it.

Across my heart, you've traveled so reverently -- sojourned so far.

I've wished many a time, pondering upon many a bright, neighboring star.

I wish I may, I wish I might, be your star this sentimental and darkened night.

Let me shine eternal; let me be your vision -- and your desired sight.

As the meteoric showers of Perseus embrace time and space,

I dream to be your soulful entity gracing your being -- your face.

Is it too much to request your affections --  do I admire you too much?

Look down at me, I reach to you -- your hand I fervently do touch.

 

 

Author's Note

Just a little something.

Reviews

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

I think you got something here. Trying so hard to get the attention of someone who doesn't have the same feelings, or for someone who doesn't know you exist. Infactuation can fall in between Love and hate. So many people try to make true love, but it's not "trying" it's called what is. Forcing, loving, hating, seeing what it's doing to your heart, makes you want to go crazy, but it's all in your mind. The mind is powerful;it can make dreams come true but in the end, it was all in your mind. I believe that if you get the shun, move on. It's not worth the time you take to make it so... that's just my own thoughts. K

[Voice11]

wow..I love the flow...perfect harmony in light and dark, reaching to the light....nice job!

[Meredith Leigh]

This is very beautiful, and extremely interesting. Your choice of words is very well done, and the flow is smooth and recognizeable. This is really well done, great job!

- Kriss

[mmzx]

very interesting and meaningful, i like it.
:D

good job.
and thank you for reviewing.

[QuietPoet]

This was beautiful and deep. I liked this. Nice flow.

[Nathan Noble]

a wonderful read. great imagery and flow.

[razormuse]

oh this one is good. you knocked it out of the park. what a tender sentiment. short and very sweet as usual your writing is so soulful.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very beautiful piece so very well written with beautiful imagery.