Diamond- That's life

pretty self explanitory I would think. Just moved out on my own... not as fun as I thought it would be.

The Water's getting colder

 

the world is getting real

 

Welcome to your life son

 

mum's the word on how you feel

 

is it all you aksed for?

 

does it live up to your dream?

 

open wide and love it son

 

this bitter taste beneath the cream

 

the blurry veil is lifting now

 

it's time to start to live

 

hollow words and false remorse

 

is all that we can give

 

you might be just so special

 

you might be all you dream

 

your falce nieve pretences

 

are tearing at the seams

 

no one can offer answers

 

that's because no one knows

 

believe whatever helps you

 

and know that your age shows.

 

 

Reviews

[Eustacia]

I liked this, the first 2 stanzas really drew me in, great menaing!