NOW WHAT?

NOW WHAT?

A Chapter by JackDeaniels

NOW WHAT?
These are the plans for the continuation and editing of this book. Obviously up until now was just the first draft of the complete story.

  • Upon resetting his checkpoint to 12:13PM, I'd like Todd to experience trying and failing to save the school a few more times, this time having only 32 minutes. I'd like to fully describe his despair upon repeating defeat time and again.

  • After saving the school, I'd have the police arrest and question Todd, jailing him afterwards with the suspicion of being connected to a terrorist cell. I'd also want to add a few problems during his jail-time.
    • I'm not sure if these problems will be the twins' attack on his friends, having him try escaping jail to save them, or something else. I guess what I'll end up doing is having one of the officers be connected to the event, killing him whilst his spending his time under arrest.
    • I think I'll have the twins attack Todd and his friends only after those events will be the best case scenario for me, because I want to keep the part where he dies waking up, trying to fight the twins a lot with no time to get ready. But then again, I want to give Todd a reason to escape jail, so it'll take a while to think up how I'll manage to do that.

  • I wouldn't want the only perpetrators to be the problem twins, a high school should only be the first target of some larger organisation those two have joined. I want Todd to investigate further into them, going up against a fully functioning terrorist group, making the book longer than a few measly chapters. But for that I'll have to think up a whole lot of details about that organisation, who are they? What is their cause? 

There are a few more things on my mind that I'd like to add, but writing them here publicly will spoil the reader's surprise. Let's just say emotions will run wild and tears will flow free >:D




SIDE NOTE

This is a personal message from me to all of you, each and every one of my readers.

Whether you enjoyed the book or not, whether you subscribed, commented or did neither of those things, I'm happy either way, and I appreciate it deeply.

I'd like to show my gratitude for reading my book, it means a lot to me and I can't even begin to describe my pride and my feeling of accomplishment knowing people actually enjoyed MY shabby writing.


THANK YOU!



© 2017 JackDeaniels


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