Early Friend

WW2 boogie woogie

I came around and made the greatest cup of coffee there is.....!

the brew was gorgeous!

the mug was just enormous!

it's smooth performance

improved the gloomy morning!

Aroma rising off the best cup of java there is....!

it's percolations

rejuvenated nations!

hand brewed creation!

a coffee jubilation!

Aroma rising from the best cup of coffee there is....!

was so surprising!

the flavor so enticing!

was tantalizing

blend was so inspiring!!

I came around and made the greatest cup of coffee

there is....!

Garaunteed, the best in the biz....!

Guaranteed, the best in the biz....!

Reviews

[Tomoe Tellez]

This just put a smile on my face, it is fun to read and even more aloud thanks to the good use of rhymes. It is like a poem coming from an eccentric story or fairy tale, like the Brothers Grimm book. Great job!

[Girl With A Pen]

I now want coffee....

Haha, a very enjoyable read

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Haha i find your poetry quite funny, makes me laugh.
At the same time its very good. Such big words geeez, and rhymes where amazing. Funny how you wrote somthing so cleaver about well just a cup of coffee. Very well done indeed.

[FaeryQueen]

this a such a great read!

[Jen Walters]

I might put a censor on this one just because of some of the language and you don't know who is reading this but that's just one of my opinions on this. Another great alliteration poem, describing food or drink. I also love the humor and the pride you used to brag about this great cup of java. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.