Mr. Kitty

Senryu

Canned tuna in hand

jumps from lap to the ground

hungry cat meows

Author's Note

cant tell which end goes up or down

Reviews

[FaeryQueen]

cool form btw. i love this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Idk if i would call this a poem lol.
More like a sentence. If you want an honest review i love cats but i didn't like this poem much but thats just my opinion. Keep writing always :)

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

its a haiku. and not great I admit. a funnier and well written one is called a peeling done by cherrypepperbomb or someone like that. shes around here. had me in stitches.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

It is most likely good just don't think i like haikus is all lol.