Used To

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You used to laugh.

You used to love.

You used to paint.

You used to think you weren't proud but 

now your puzzles tumbling down to

what sounds like a broken waterfall.

The sound of music echoes out 

from the balcony where you used to 

laugh and you used to think, where 

you used to dance to the music, and you'd sing...

but, eventually everything can be found

tumbling down some broken waterfall.

You'd make everyone around

think you weren't run aground

or your soul wasn't sold for some

rocks found below a broken waterfall.

Why did you have to leave?

Your love just like mystery...

jagged, like a puzzle piece... 

Why did you have to leave?

I used to laugh.

I used to sing.

I used to dance.

I used to mean something.

I used to be in love you. 

Author's Note

Touched this up. Hopefully didnt scare you away eith the rougher version. Give it a look through and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Nuuuuuummbbbeeerrss and rating

[mattavelli]

I like it. Was this for a contest?

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

yeh, give me a review with the numbers brah!

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Excellent write.....very creative....I think it could be a beautiful song also.