CONTESTER

Written: July 20th Location: Desk with computer Attire: Inappropiate

Twenty-two words 

seems brusquely absurd!

My tighty whiteys 

are less constrictive!

Relaxed waistband.

Plenty of space in

the seat. Welcoming!

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

All writers have favorite/lucky attire, I'm just glad you have something on...wouldn't want the picture of the alternative that I suspect some of our co-writers might be most comfortable in! 'Course, now, THAT picture (of some of the others) won't go away! AAAHHH!!!

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

hahaha its hot in mexico! you are too kind. goodnight carol. you are my first stop in the morning so get ready to read an avalanche of comments

[Farmgirl]

hahah I love the wimsy in this short piece !

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

it was for a contest set with a limit of 22 words i thought it went like a haiku towards the end. thanks for stopping by to read it! throw a poem or two my way when you have a chance!

[Farmgirl]

Oh my poems wouldnt interest you ..
But yes I enjoyed this alot and im happy to have discovered you when I was searching for new writing .. =) read mine at your own risk.. its not for the faint of heart ... not saying you are ... But its not easily embraced thats for sure !

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

ha thanks F.G. and i will enter at my own risk. thanks for the read and thanks for the encouragement. i have a list of people i need to read today and you're on it. see ya around later today with my reviews. thanks F.G!

[Farmgirl]

Anytime i enjoyed your shortvwrite.. and lol okay but its out there lol

[JulianaSun]

Nice. Really nice. This is a funny poem. I don´t know if you meant that way. Sometimes, twenty-two words are more than enough to say what you want. Even two words suffice under extreme circumstances. :)

J