Porch Light Halo

These are some lyrics i wrote. Appreciate the review you all!

It was dark outside with the porch light on.

That glowin' halo sat as my crow,

Saw my reflection on the moon behind the clouds.

And i asked myself...Like i do now.

Its dark outside with that porch light on.

i feel so tired from the breaths ive drawn.

I look and see that every star is gone.

Well am i dreaming

It''ll be dark outside with those headlights on.

And ill trace the lines my map has drawn.

Moments after i make it home,

I'll see you, wont be long.

Author's Note

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