MYSTERY IN THE CORRIDOR

One day a young washer man

Came to a Royal palace.

The prince was taken aback

Because the washer man was just like him

The prince said to the washer-man

“Ask your mother if the king has ever visited your house”

The next day the washer man came to the prince

And he said to him’ your father has never visited my house

But my father would visit your house too often

To collect and wash the clothes’

 

 

Reviews

[Valentine]

Laughing....very neat poem..valentine

[Muse]

This changes the concept of wearing someone elses shoe. Try washing their clothes instead. Very clever analogy.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the twist of this poem. Sometime we learn lessons we do not want to know. Than you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[LadyNaida]

Tis very interesting.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Interesting read. I liked it though. Great write!

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Interesting.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Fudal remainings are still visible here and there in a different mood.. Nice narration ...........

[Lily Mae]

Excellent write JVl.. thank you for sharing..x

[Judy Ponceby]

:D A most interesting and intriguing twist :) Brilliantly done. :)