JUDGMENT

A monk meditated upon God

In front of a woman’s house.

She was a  debaucher

Each time a visitor came to her house

He would pick up a stone  and throw it near by

The time rolled on and the years passed by

The heap of stones filed up day by day

The monk and the woman became old

The woman died one day

Heaven became her way

The monk died the next day

He was doomed to hell

He started to yell.

What sort of judgment is this?

The monk asked God.

God said” you concentrated only on her fraud.

She dedicated her soul to the Lord”

 

 

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

The ending was a great suprise to me. I think this is one of my favorites by you, so far (although I have more reading to do!). I think you captured your intent nicely and wrote it beautifully. You do well with putting your images out there for others to see. Well done and thank you so much sharing!

[J. J. Nightingale]

A Poem with a punch ! ... Good ! ........ Jasmine :)

[Valentine]

A very interesting way of telling this..Kathie

[Livana Lowell]

What an incredibly interesting story shortly weaved into a good moral and principle of faith. We focus on other people's sins, that we lose focus and forget our own. Condemnation belongs to God and is his power.

This must be in reference to "Those without sin cast the first stone" I presume only modernly crafted. I was glad to read this.

Thank you for sending this to me.

Sincerely Livana Lowell (LL)

God bless

[KAREN]

Tells a great story how we all need to be right with the Lord!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Interesting story realy a Barath views, thanks a lot..

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Great...!!!

the monk hence distracted ! and the woman got the salvation !

Awesome Write :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Wow, wasnt expecting that but it is so truthful in life, Powerful message here, Don't focus on negatives and live in your own business not others.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Very interesting!

[Jvl narasimharao]

Dear Chris, My spelling is wrong according to the British English but it is correct according to American spelling.I followed the computer