THE SUN AND THE COCOON

Our life is a mere illusion

We are under incredible delusion

The sun neither sets in  the west

Nor does it rise in the east

The earth seems to be standing

The Sun looks  as if it were moving

The star we see is not there

It has gone afar

We think  as though we live for ever

We hate our very neighbour

And neglect even our life giver

How do we feel when the earth does tremor?

We may climb the Mount Everest

Can we stop any tempest?

We might have set our foot on the moon

Before God we are like a baby in its mouth with a spoon

Unless we come out of our cocoon

We will never see the brightness of the Sun at noon

 

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You've given us the world to ponder.. those things seen and unseen.. the hope of understanding if we can gain our wings in wonder.. Beautiful, passionate write of life.

[Lily Mae]

I agree with Thrinna that is my favorite part also.. You are so right if we don't change we will never see the brightness of the sun at noon.. xx :) x

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Spirited and relaxed and the same time, great flow and reason, good read.

[Thea]

"Our life is a mere illusion
We are under incredible delusion"
A very great beginning for an excellent poem...The flow is so amazing along with the rhyming scheme...Well done... :)))