THE SUN AND THE COCOON

Our life is a mere illusion

We are under incredible delusion

The sun neither sets in  the west

Nor does it rise in the east

The earth seems to be standing

The Sun looks  as if it were moving

The star we see is not there

It has gone afar

We think  as though we live for ever

We hate our very neighbour

And neglect even our life giver

How do we feel when the earth does tremor?

We may climb the Mount Everest

Can we stop any tempest?

We might have set our foot on the moon

Before God we are like a baby in its mouth with a spoon

Unless we come out of our cocoon

We will never see the brightness of the Sun at noon

 

 

Reviews

[Liza]

perception shifts and forms; perception of life of everything - a sensual trigger to the mind.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true in this poem. Must live a life. Must roam, sing, dance and meet new people. We must touch the plants and breath in the fresh air of life. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very powerful! loved it.

[Muse]

Wisdom comes with living and penning in beauty. Awesome writing my friend!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

You always have interesting way of words with your pieces. One of the things I admire about your work. Inspirational. Another great write!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Great write and dedication of the Almighty.. Understanding is enlightened our strength of the soul....

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

You are very talented!

[Ruth]

Oh wow love! This is so so beautiful! We all need to head for the sun and see life is mere illusion/a test of sorts! I adore this and your writing!
xx

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

good poem great flow I like it