step by step

When I want to climb the mountain up,

You hope I will be a great flop.

Why do you always frown?

And try to pull me down.

 

You are always jealous of my success.

Your envy is undoubtedly in excess.

I never intend to do you any harm.

I am always very calm.

 

The only fault with me is I am incredibly talented.

That is why I am always being hunted.

You try to cause me a lot of friction.

I can’t live without some positive action.

 

You should know that your duty is not to stop

Anyhow, I will get to the top step by step

My Lord has given me a wonderful soul

I will surely reach my destined goal

 

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

I know, too well, the type of person you mention in this piece. Your words hit home for me and many people out there. Unfortunately there's not much to be done about people like this except figure out if their negativity is on purpose and, if not, whether or not you choose to keep them in your life and let them know what they're doing. Well done!

[Poetic Beauty]

Everyone has their own mountains to climb in this life and it is never an easy task especially when negative people try to stand in your path.

[LadyNaida]

This is beautifully written. Expression of emotions by someone that is willing to run the race and finish it no matter what.

[sarah]

This is inspirational great write!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

You are always jealous of my success.

Your envy is undoubtedly in excess.

I never intend to do you any harm.

I am always very calm.

...........good writing. I liked much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is a fair journey. We must reach for the stars with no concern for the people who want us to fail. I like the honest and direct words in this poem. I like the last line. Can't give up and we must go forward always. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Wonderful write!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Excellent poem.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Poised and deadly, your words always feel perfectly placed to me, well done

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Concrete steps.. strong.