EMOTIONAL TSUNAMI

When I speak the facts

Even my mother’s heart cracks

I have faced many problems in life

my words are not endorsed by my wife

 

I can’t tell lies

Because I am wise

I have become mute

I have changed my route

 

There is emotional tsunami in my heart

The vitality has lost in every part

My tongue may not speak what is true

But my soul hasn’t swerved from its spiritual view

 

 

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

There is emotional tsunami in my heart
The vitality has lost in every part
My tongue may not speak what is true
But my soul hasn’t swerved from its spiritual view


I love that stanza especially the first line ...There is emotional tsunami in my heart

Beautifully written.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Emotional beautifully written piece. Great write.

[lovejulez03]

Great piece! It's pretty different and I love that. "But My soul hasn't swerved from its spiritual view" is my favorite line. You did a good job keeping it sweet and simple, yet strong. Thanks for sharing! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I like the way you use the word "TSUNAMI. " The human spirit will be tested and most of us will make our mother's heart crack. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[brenda]

wow i got amazed from reading this nice write definetly keep writing !:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Keep that soul on the right track and none of this will matter.......excellent JVL!

[M.Babu]

"There is emotional tsunami in my heart
The vitality has lost in every part
My tongue may not speak what is true
But my soul hasn’t swerved from its spiritual view"

Nicely done.
~M.Babu~