CREATION AND RECREATION

A virgin becomes a woman

only when she is occupied, possessed

caressed and squeezed by her lover

or husband. As a buzzing bee sucks

nectar from the flower, he sips manna from her rosy lips.

 

A man’s life is a waste

unless he smoothly touches the n*****s of his lover

and pours the loving juice in to her beautiful bosom

It is really an  ecstasy  for a man

to climb the mountains and go deep into

his lover’s bottomless valley and fathom

her inexpressible beauty

 

Blessed is the woman

whose breast is sucked most passionately by his lover

and  most lovingly by her child for milk

when she becomes a mother.

The greatest thing in this vast universe

is the happy union between a man

 and a woman which is the real source

of recreation and creation of man,

the cleverest thinking animal on earth

 

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

This has kind of an au naturale, Adam-and-Eve feel to it. Your descriptions were excellent and really pulled me in, right from the first line! I liked you ended it with the connection to the child and the never-ending cycle of life.
"unless he smoothly touches the n*****s of her lover" I'm pretty sure you mean "his lover."
I also noticed that the word "deep" appears in both the fifth and sixth lines of the second stanza.

[Ruth]

Amazing wording here, I am blown away by such depths!
Speechless actually! lol
xx

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Pointed and real a well placed piece, well done

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Very beautiful poem JVL

[Veronica Chandler]

Intensely passionate write about the natural union of man and woman. Very nicely done.

[brenda]

sweet great write!

[Lily Mae]

A beautiful poem JVL...x

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is a clever write.