WAITING

WAITING

A Poem by Jvl narasimharao

The day waits for the glorious sun

Like the night for the pleasant Moon

In hot summer we fervently wait for rain

In the railway station we wait for the train

 

Waiting seems to be a part of life

Like a husband waits for his dear wife

On this site we wait for our friends’ poetry

And try to understand their poetic chemistry

 

Waiting is a part and parcel of nature

That is the beauty of its wonderful feature

The spring longs patiently for the seasonal cuckoo

The trees daily wait for their sunny view

 

Waiting may cause us some pain

But the pain eventually gives us the desired gain

Let us all wait for our respective great event

And cherish that  beautiful moment

 

© 2012 Jvl narasimharao


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Aahh, the flux of waiting...it seems to haunt us all from time to time. We wait for the seasons to change, the lights to change, the day to turn to night and back to day again...and this becomes the cycle and flow of our lives. I like the way you end this piece, with the idea that waiting will eventually lead to moments of cherished beauty. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Nice work JVL .. a very different topic to write on .. and a very nice way to write it .. Lovely . !!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I agree with what Tate said......what a wonderful piece JVL :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Waiting may cause us some pain

But the pain eventually gives us the desired gain

Let us all wait for our respective great event

And cherish that beautiful moment

this is very profound

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Jvl narasimharao

ANDHRA PRADESH, ASIA, India



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I am JVL NARASIMHA RAO from India.I write poems both in my mother tongue and in English, my favourite tongue.I am an english teacher, trainer, resource person and text book writer.English is my breat.. more..

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