WAITING

The day waits for the glorious sun

Like the night for the pleasant Moon

In hot summer we fervently wait for rain

In the railway station we wait for the train

 

Waiting seems to be a part of life

Like a husband waits for his dear wife

On this site we wait for our friends’ poetry

And try to understand their poetic chemistry

 

Waiting is a part and parcel of nature

That is the beauty of its wonderful feature

The spring longs patiently for the seasonal cuckoo

The trees daily wait for their sunny view

 

Waiting may cause us some pain

But the pain eventually gives us the desired gain

Let us all wait for our respective great event

And cherish that  beautiful moment

 

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Aahh, the flux of waiting...it seems to haunt us all from time to time. We wait for the seasons to change, the lights to change, the day to turn to night and back to day again...and this becomes the cycle and flow of our lives. I like the way you end this piece, with the idea that waiting will eventually lead to moments of cherished beauty. Nicely done.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Waiting may cause us some pain

But the pain eventually gives us the desired gain
..............good lines Rao. I like it. With regards.

[lovejulez03]

I was pleasantly suprised at how such a simple word as "waiting", with some deep meaning, is portrayed so nicely in this poem. I think you did a great job with this piece and I like how you made it happen! Good job, I enjoyed it :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great imagery on waiting and how it effects every day life!

[?]

awwww yes, waiting.
Good things come to those who wait.

Beautifully written JVL

[KAREN]

So much truth and meaning in this poem. waiting is hard, but it's a part of life we have to endure.

[Raspberry Rebel]

It's a good job I'm a patient person...I enjoy seeing what's going to unfold...even when waiting seems to take an eternity...I enjoyed this.
Thank you so much for reading me :)

[Call It A Day]

As impatient as I can be at times, this poem made me feel as if waiting was some beautiful metaphor for destiny. Deep thoughts, my friend. And a great way to extrapolate poetically on a common occurrence.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Nature, time & life all share the need for patience, perfection is in the moment and fully expressed in due time. This is beautiful.

[Judy Ponceby]

Lovely perspective on the importance of waiting. Impatience can take away from the pleasure gained in anticipation. Well done. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Waiting for warm days and being able to enjoy a new day. Is what we desire in youth. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote