THE CAGE AND THE SAGE

The earnings of a soul

In the jungle t it was a beautiful place.
I traveled at an alarming pace.
I Thought he was a kind sage.
But he kept me in an inescapable cage
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I was imprisoned in the cage for so long.
And I forgot my melodious song.
Fortunately, in the cage I found a hole.
Which caused immeasurable joy to my soul.

Instantly, I perched on huge tree.
Now I am absolutely free
I felt the greatness of freedom
You can not measure my stardom

Author's Note

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Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Hello Jvl,

This is a beautiful poem. Freedom is something we all can experience as we let go of those thoughts that can keep us imprisoned. When we find freedom from our minds that's when we truly find freedom. Great read!

[Coyote Poetry]

We under-rate freedom.
"Instantly, I perched on huge tree.
Now I am absolutely free
I felt the greatness of freedom
You can not measure my stardom"
I loved the above lines. We miss freedom, when she is gone. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A divided piece that does not rely on obvious thought, well done, good read.