supreme lord

 You were born in the cowshed

But the great philosophy you spread.

And some invaluable words you said

Indeed you are the supreme Lord

You played with children

Killed many a demon

Played with a melodious flute

Showed your devotees the virtuous route

Taught great lessons to women

Loved them without semen

You lived like an ordinary man

Danced like a beautiful swan

You had a wonderful war plan

And protected the Pandava clan

You saved your sister from great humiliation

You are an ideal God for the Hindu nation

We celebrate your birth day today

Because you showed us the righteous way

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

Lovely piece and usage of words. I enjoyed it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the description of the birth to the belief in his love and kindness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[TL Boehm]

Well penned tribute - reads much like a song. Nicely done.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Hmm..nice praise of Sri Krishna :-) Happy Janmashtami )