Pancakes

Pancakes

A Poem by Sixth Moon
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Pancakes are lovely creations

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There once was a kid that liked to dream about pancakes

Silky syrup covering large blankets of flour cooked in oil
He dreamed that one day his plate will be filled with them
He closed his eyes and watched his hand pick up the hungry fork
Oh how fluffy and soft the treats from the pan tasted
Smoothly going down his throat after each heartfelt bite
The gooey sweet maple syrup slithered down his teeth onto his tongue
Every time this kid had this dream,
There is a wonderful scene in his mind
A Gigantic pool of pancake batter in his pool
Good and Ready for him to scoop up as much as he could handle
Right next to it there is a 30 foot tall pan and bucket of Canola Oil
……………He has to watch is weight………
Pancakes and Waffles it’s all the same
With a little bit of chocolate chips, whip cream, chocolate syrup
Perhaps strawberry toppings with a little bit of cherries on the side
He can't wait to phone all his friends and invite them to the Pancake Party
Warm up the skillet, make ready with the plates and forks.
We are digging family, friends, and associates
Ode to the pancakes!
 
Pancakes for life!

© 2008 Sixth Moon


Author's Note

Sixth Moon
PANCAKES

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Darn you, your imagery has gotten my stomach, to voice its desire for pancakes, too. Sadly, they are part of my restricted food list, being diabetic. Hoping you're enjoying your pancakes, right now. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow! makes me wanna eat pancakes right NOW!
the imagery is so good, enough to make my mouth water! :)

love this poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


As long as you aren't having sausage, ham, or bacon with them I'm okay with it. :) Great write. A fitting tribute to pancakes.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 6, 2008

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Sixth Moon
Sixth Moon

Atlanta, GA



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