Blue Butter Fly

Messages I recieved from a Blue Butterfly

Can I call you my blue insect angel?

I want you to help me understand

Why are you so beautiful?

Your wings are as delicate as rose petals

You look as if you’re anxious to float gracefully in the wind

I haven't seen you around before, 

Did you come for a small visit?

Do you have a message to tell me?

I am delighted that I am with you now

A cheerful spirit you have

I do have a lot on my mind these days,

But when I look at you, those troublesome worries

Kindly fade away

This moment I live for you

 

*Flap Flap*

 

Blue Butterfly, You and I are one

Your wings showed me true beauty

Calm, Beauty, Love, and Laughter,

All that exist in this very moment

Those are the only things that are real, Right?

Stay pure, Stay Gentle is what your spirit tells me

I'll carry your wisdom until the end of time

During this golden minute your azure prescense triggered peace within me

Blue little Butter fly angel,

Be safe, I bid you farewell

Thank you

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar, spelling, and stuff

Reviews

[Constance]

The grammar can be worked on. :) I like the unusual metaphors you use. You have a very clear and distinct voice here. I like the contrast between insect and and the beautiful words you used. This is a nice, refreshing read. I can certainly say you set yourself apart. Your wording works, even though it is a little different.
There really aren't as many grammar and spelling mistakes as you appear to fear, so if you don't mind, I'll help with those.
The first disturbance of grammar I see is in the second to last line of the first stanza. The word faded, to maintain verb tense, should be fade instead.
In the second line of the last stanza, "you showed me to truth" should be "you showed me the truth" or "you taught me of truth". Either one would be acceptable.
The only misspelling is prescense- presence.
Your grammar and spelling problems are not serious enough to stop the flow or make the meaning unclear. You did well in conveying your message, the emotions, the meaning behind your words.. I merely pointed those things out in case you'd like to fix them. I really enjoyed this change of pace. Well done!