Apple red Scars

A Poem by Joshua Gerlach

The deep wounds may never heal,
even not with proper mending and treatment.

The scars will form red, and shine as I want them.

Crack the whip once more, my heart may break,
and cease to form again the scars that held it together;
Bright red, like blood, like an apple.

© 2009 Joshua Gerlach

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Christel Grady

Absolutely perfect grammar! Applause!!!

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Siobhan MacIntyre

Excellently rendered with a magnificent, old-fashioned sentence structure.

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Added on October 31, 2008
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Joshua Gerlach

Spokane, WA

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I'm 17, I've trimmed down the number of writing projects I'm working on, and write in moderation and weekly-to-monthly intervals. I play video games while I think of what I'm going to write, sometime.. more..