Walk away

JR

 

 

If I could just hold you with each passing

day, the skies would become bluer, washing

all my troubles away.

If I could just stare into your adoring eyes,

I'd never have the feeling of any melancholic

goodbyes.

If I could connect with the warmth of your

soul, I'd never get angry and lose my control.

I'd kiss your lips like a iridescent dream, like

a sunrise or sunset in a brilliant color scheme.

It could be magic if you'd only agree, to dig

a little deeper and know the real me. Oh how

I've pondered every minute of everyday, from

the moment I saw you then watched you walk

away.

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

beautiful, warm, filled with longing

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was so beautifully written, and the yearning to know what may have been or could of been if things were done differently is so strong and powerful, the ending sumed it up nicely! Great poem Joe!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

We always wonder what could have been, what should have been........beautiful piece.

[Liza]

awwwww :( so sweet and so sad....
this reminds me of a darn rap song
with the line
i hate to see you go but i love to watch you walk away
me ^ trying to be funny :-o