Sad Alliance

S**t happens :(

What a exhilarating alliance

we both had shared, in the

beginning such adoration

we both declared.

An oasis of affection came

so naturally, but we never

really prepared for the

longevity.

Oh how I miss all that you

were, my love my heart, now

it's all just a blur.

You say I've changed I'm not

the same my passion had

vanished when you blew out

the flame.

So this is our dilemma, what

it all comes down to, separate

ways a sorrowful adieu.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Pebbles]

Such sadness when one becomes two once more .....can we ever prepare our selves for things that come from the heart .....i think not, we just have to go with the eb and flow and learn how to swim sometimes in shallow waters :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sad and heart wrenching, but sometimes it is best to cut the strings before things become out of control! Excellent write

[Seashell]

sometimes for the best...may not seem it at the time...but a new horizon awaits..and how exciting must that be...a new life... a new beginning...wow
Nice but sad write Joe.
Thanks
Have a great weekend.
Be good
Babs xx

[Ruth]

This is divinely written, as always! It is saddening a relationship can turn out this way..happens all the time I know but when worded through a poet's heart..well...has an immense effect!
Beautiful piece love xx

[VelvetRosetta]

Elegance within sadness, A wonderful piece of work!
Goodbyes are almost never easy, I just try adn look at them as, it wasnt meant to be, life will take us on different paths we meet new people, some good some bad, some teach us hate, some love, some pity...I say we meet the people we need in a certain time of life, then those people need to go to meet those who are destined to know them as well.
I enjoyed this piece of yours! Made me realize something I am going through right now, thank you.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Sadness beautifully penned.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Sometimes saying good-bye is the hardest part. Even more difficult then staying and fighting the battle day in and day out. Beautiful poem as always from you.

[Marie Harrison]

Sad poem, something tellls me you put a lot of heart and soul into this one.
Beautiful

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A beautiful goodbye full of elegant poetic memories, written in tearful bliss.....lovely!

[Liza]

bitter sweet expression - said so smooth - felt so rough
i have felt this; the nostalgia of the beginning; the new feeling wears off; how sad it is to be so smitten with the unfamiliar and become bursted with boredom and lack of motivation from dreams turning into reality - the fantasy and longing tend to draw us more...