Fatigued

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cities

of glass

bronzed

from

the sun

I’ve grown

fatigued

of this

life’s hollowed

exploitations.

 

My mind

menaces

indecision

over obscured

reasoning.

How defiant

must one be

to muse

never more.

Reviews

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

Short, to the point! Very good piece. Good Write!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent piece! Somehow I think we all can relate to this write!

[Tate Morgan]

HMMMM can we ever know enough? I doubt it the more i learn the less I know

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A monstrous tribe of emotionless empty Sigismund, an extremely well penned and imagery flowing piece, wel done my friend.

[Liza]

wow. loss of all hope, worthiness running low and life's miracle dwindling within a soul....no one said life was easy

[Ladysue]

oh wow this speaks loudly and to me...excellent indeed...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I have tried to walk the path of that defiance and the musing catches me every time........excellent dark piece