Secretly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Secretly I found you

beneath a willow tree,

a single tear upon your

cheek, a sweet scent of

potpourri.

 

I offered my assistance

as my hand reached out

to you, I sensed a slight

resistance, and felt a

breeze pass through.

 

I wrapped my arms

around you and whispered

it’s okay, I know just

what you’re going through,

for my heart sent me here

today. 

 

Your eyes met mine with

a smile, was it me you were

looking for, a symphony was

playing love songs, from a

garden right next door.

 

Secretly I found you

beneath a willow tree,

not a tear upon your face

just the sweet scent of

destiny.

 

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

The last stanza is not what I was expecting from this poem and it was a pleasant surprise. The flow of the poem was smooth and the taste of this poem was sweet.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

so full od depth!
the whole thing is beautiful! love it!

[Audrey Howitt]

Beautifully written. There is a sense of peacefulness and destiny about it. Really loved this one.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I loved this piece, It's so inspiring; eautifully written. The image was captivating. The pictures you have for each poem are enchantingly lovely. You do such nice work.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wow.....the format of this piece amazes me. Mainly the rhyme scheme. I could learn from you. Quite beautiful!

[cfix]

This is such a wonderful emotional piece. I like this it is so very lovely.

[My Fair Lady]

So often we find ourselves while wandering around in life's garden. This is one to keep and cherish. I always love your deep romantacism, your tender way of looking at women, and your most gentle side that would make any woman want to be held.