Over You

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Through valleys low

and mountains high

through jungles

dense and deserts

dry.

 

I will come for you

in times of trouble

helping sift through

all distressing rubble.

 

I do these things

because my aim is

true, I hope you see

that it’s always been you.

 

So if you need anything

anything at all, make it

me; the one that you call.

 

I surrender to you all

which is mine, my heart

my soul my temple my

shrine.

 

If by chance you

decide to be free, it

would truly devastate

me.

 

Yet I’ll stand by as I

always do,  I’ll never be

completely over you.

 

Reviews

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

You really know how do get into our women's hearts... don't you?
Your thought provoking, sensitive, caring...Ooh, all those luscious grab at your soul adjectives that you so arfully craft into rhyme and story.

[LA Lorena]

Oh, such a tender and most loving write, well expressed and full of sweet emotion. I love this!

[Lily Mae]

A beautiful soft write on an intense love. I love it.. :) x

[Ladysue]

Such wonderful and devoted sentiments...beautiful and moving...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

It doesn't get any sweeter than this.............

[Sunni Davis]

When I read the title, I was expecting something about breaking up or moving on from someone who'd left you. Instead, I was pleasantly surprised to read a very sweet poem about love and devotion. Once again, your words have tugged at my heart. You have a wonderful gift for making emotions from words.

[My Fair Lady]

Feeling this. As write such identifyable thoughts and feelings. So true that when one has been woven into our tapestry, even when the tread is gone.. that part still has echo of them.

[Elle B. T.]

This is a beautiful poem of need and love. I really like the way it's written, the simple rhyme and honest words make the meaning seem more sincere because you don't need to dress up those feelings.

"I surrender to you all
which is mine, my heart
my soul my temple my
shrine."

I really love that stanza it is beautiful and memorable and the fact that the rest of the poem lends a masculine voice, this message of willingly giving all he is, makes it even more heartfelt. Great...no... Lovely?, wonderful?, beautiful?
PHENOMENAL poem! ;)