Fear

What is

shall always be and what was will

always lie behind thee.

Freedoms      

divided

conquering

spirit,

the end                   

is near,

fortified

with

primal

fear.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Harley Ann]

hmm. this is definitely interesting, to say the least. I like the way you view fear here...
it just seems like theres a lot going on in the beginning, and then it dwindles down to "primal fear". Although, looking back on it, it actually kind of works :D

[Drake Ryder]

Great imagery. The mind can be one's foe sometimes! When prodded into an act by fear, people might do anything, and most of the things they might do due to the panic would be bad things! Fear is what people should be fearing.
Good poem, flows nicely.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

fear is assuredly both the mind and heart killer~ excellent potrayal~

[Liza]

the mind can be trained to be our master or enemy
fear is the motivation
love is the liberation

[Robin]

amazing what mankind will do driven by fear ~