I'll be waiting

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I’d tremble, at the thought of losing you,

devastated, don’t think I could ever pull

through.

 

I’d crumble, into a useless heap, lonely days

and nights without you, Toss and turn in my

sleep.

 

I’d call your name; I wouldn’t get a reply,

heart aching tears, as I break down and cry.

 

At this moment, I desire and thirst, I pray

to god, that I would always go first.

 

You are the breath that breathes life into me,

my purpose my soul my tranquility.

 

If I go first, I don’t want you to cry, because

I’ll be waiting, till the day that you die.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Charles]

You really nailed the end there, with that pic...ooh. Good read, SS.

[china]

"It's better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all"- Alfred Lord Tennyson. Excellent write Silent, you really put your heart in this one.

[Kesha]

Very touching, very moving read! It is very hard to let go of the one you love, I just couldn't imagine letting my love go, very good poem! :)

[Marie Harrison]

This is really a touching poem. The hardest thing to do is to let go of the one you truly love. Very romantic poem from your heart. The song goes perfectly too. You pick the best songs to accompany your writings!

[Amy Bumpas]

This is heartbreaking and sad...a tale of love so
strong that sacrifice is the only way to go.
I love the picture you put with this.

[Wildfleour]

Intense emotion. Love is eternal.

[David W Moore III]

Very romantic and obviously heartfelt. This is one of the few ways that talking about your lovers death is not creepy. Very nice.

[Liza]

holy moly
your imagination on this one
is surreal...

[Cherrie Palmer]

beautiful