Essence

 

 

 

 

Overwhelming elation pulses, she is but a fragrant flower among flaccid foliage. To know she exists rejuvenates my hollowed essence.

 

Her breath, our breath together inspired sensual innuendos, passion overflowing dominate desires.

 

Heavenly Golden rays of sunshine compliments her flawless reflection. Seasons change along with her elegance; I flourish with a flash of her knowing smile.

 

Her skin a pale joie de vivre, her perception humorous and engaging. Poised fascination envelopes all that I cherish, I stand totally mesmerized.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Not sure if you're talking about a goddess here or Nature in all it's glory. Both would be apropos. Physical beauty in all it's glory is a sight to behold, no matter where it radiates from. I am floating to the beauty of your words. Lovely.

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you, it could mean both? You know I ain't that bright. :)

[Frieda P]

Silly boy, all that quantum physics malarkey has made your emotional responder fuzzy wuzzy. :-)

[Dream Weaver]

LOL silly girl "Tricks are for kids" :P oh wait, that was "Silly Rabbit" ;)

[Frieda P]

Wabbit ;-)

[Dream Weaver]

That's Bugs lol

[Frieda P]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vEOaWVA2z4c
sounds like 'wabbit' to me! :-P

[Dream Weaver]

I speak of "Tricks" the cereal not the serial killer lol

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh when we truly love someone their physical flaws fall away leaving only passion and desire. It is an all consuming feeling the glides across the skin to the whole and envelopes the mind. This is what this piece says to me. Stunning and passionate.

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Kristina, always appreciated from you...

[Poetic Beauty]

anytime Joe

[Ruth]

And I sit here...mesmerised by this beauty...wonderful xox

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you for the glowing endorsement sweetie! xo

[Celeste21]

What does joie de vivre mean? I think I know someone by that username. I like this piece. I like how her being herself is like a perfume to you, kind of ravishing you. As if one scent of her could cause you to completely lose balance. Love it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

absolutely breathtaking!

[My Fair Lady]

Your perception of women is captivating. To be viewed with such adoration... what every woman would cherish.

[Robin]

essence captured ~

[David W Moore III]

I I love linguistic 'lliteration. Sorry had to stretch for that one. Pulsing elation... Am I the only one thinking a bit naughty? Love the piece my friend.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

As do I stand totally mesmerized. Your words drip like honey from a comb of sensuality and desire. My breath you have taken away by these romantic and erotic thoughts. Bravo.