Kiss of Death

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She reigns with passion though timorously enticing gestures. Spewing riddles all the while her vortex lures you in. She’s a charismatic spinster spinning her web of deceit. Be cautious one glance you’re snagged with creeping death.

 

Her eyes a beacon of blissful banter. Her scent that of a decaying rose. Such intuitive romantic behavior befalls any and all. Beware the kiss of this amorist widow. Seduction her visual pleasure, as she lies in wait for you to be tangled in trepidation.

 

You falter but her attraction too powerful too rapid.

Just one kiss is all you ask as the consummation so irresistible begins to unfold. You abruptly plea for what will be the last breath of your existence;

 

“The Kiss Of Death”

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Her eyes a beacon of blissful banter, her scent that
of a rose. Such intuitive romantic behavior befalls
any and all. Beware the kiss of this amorist widow,

Nice poem. You have done the black widow justice.

[Ladysue]

This is a brilliant line...

Seduction her visual pleasure, as she lies in wait for
you to be tangled in trepidation.

A wonderful flow to this beautifully expressed writing...

[Nina Kari]

"You falter but her attraction too powerful too rapid.
Just one kiss is all you ask as the consummation so
irresistible begins to unfold." - wonderful. video is wicked too. i love the first sentene in the second stanza, its almost shakespearian. this is just to f-in cool :D Geat job.

[Cherry Blossom]

like this yes women can be dark even if you think we are so open but we do keep stuff to our selfs so watch out lol

[JelliFyshKissUs]

That kiss isn't worth it, SS. But this poem is definitely worth the read. We women are some deathly wondrous creatures, aren't we?

[Erotic Goddess]

Seduction her visual pleasure, as she lies in wait for
you to be tangled in trepidation.

Perfect...you know you shouldn't...but damned if you can help yourself...

This was beautiful, the rhythm of the piece was very good, and I enjoyed it...

xxoxx

[J.]

Reminds me of Witchy Woman for some odd reason. Very descriptive of such a female. I guess some do have their wiles.

[Robin]

well penned my friend ~ video is a classic

[Broken Girl]

Oooooh! I like it!!! Hmmmm. Makes me think of... Yeah, I like it!!!
Wicked women! LOL

[.]

she's a dangerous lady..beautifully phrased..