True Love Ways

True Love Ways

A Poem by Dream Weaver
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Cursed by her beauty, she’s longing for true

love ways, a heart that beats for passion a

significant soul to set ablaze.


Many have come to conquer, but have failed

to see inside, the warmth of her magnificence

that truly remains untried.


Her lips keep a secret, her body disguises the

truth, she wishes for real companionship the

eternal fountain of youth.


Exquisiteness befalls her, as she searches for

that touch, to connect the inside with the out

is what she desires so much.


Never knowing who to trust, she turns her

head in uncertain disgust. Is there a man who

loves me for me, and not all on the outside for

that which they see?


She cries alone in the darkness and dreams

that there will come a day, a prince rides to her

rescue with the magic of true love ways.

 


© 2011 Dream Weaver


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i don't know what was re-edited - but its still magical as the first time...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Of course i like this one lol :) Waiting.... tick tock....she is waiting still.... haha I like the pic as well!

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Awe, this is so adorable. I really love this exquisite piece. Wonderful job hun!

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Posted 14 Years Ago


I sort of feel this way.....put up a brave front to hide my vulnerability.







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Posted 14 Years Ago


True love never seems to happen that way...and so we wait...

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Posted 14 Years Ago


absolutely beautiful~ enchanting and what a kind~ truly kind poem~

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Posted 14 Years Ago


oh my GOODNESS
oh my dear GOD
I AM SPEECHLESS
An author who knows the inside of my heart
with words i can't put into thoughts
you've done everything for me here
and i find so much comfort and joy
I am so honored
Be blessed my beautiful dear....

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Harlequin set aside. This is perfect, I loved it. !!! ...Her lips keep a secret, her body blinds the truth, she wishes for companionship the eternal fountain of youth.... my favorite line.... Great twist in the title.



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Posted 14 Years Ago



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Dream Weaver
Dream Weaver

Paradise, FL



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