Contaminated
A Poem by
Dream Weaver
Travesty
sanctimonious
portentousness
evokes
sarcasm
like a tributary
Contaminated.
Anxiety
bustles
as idiotic
doldrums
prevail.
© 2010 Dream Weaver
Author's Note
Just venting here..........
Reviews
I like the singularity of words used, they can stand alone but they build a work that adds depth to your picture
and it makes ya want to check between your covers. lol
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is one of your best pieces,very precise and sharp...
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is one of your best pieces,very precise and sharp...
oh dear..sharp as knife ...cutting..just letting it all out.....
Posted 14 Years Ago
oh dear..sharp as knife ...cutting..just letting it all out.....
I hear the chords in this one, your amp on 12
Posted 14 Years Ago
I hear the chords in this one, your amp on 12
like bullets fired~ each line a point of powerful poignancy~
Posted 14 Years Ago
like bullets fired~ each line a point of powerful poignancy~
Silent Scream, who are you referring to...the people under the stairs or the quarantined ones. That's how I view a lot of people in Corporate America. It gets in your blood, if you let it. Powerful words to express one's "fed up" situation!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Silent Scream, who are you referring to...the people under the stairs or the quarantined ones. That's how I view a lot of people in Corporate America. It gets in your blood, if you let it. Powerful words to express one's "fed up" situation!
I enjoy the potency of words. The impact is delivered well in this poetic expression..
Posted 14 Years Ago
I enjoy the potency of words. The impact is delivered well in this poetic expression..
We all have those moments when we need to vent emotions. Life isn't always easy and venting our emotions through poetry is a great way to release some of those pent up feelings that keep nagging at us.
Posted 14 Years Ago
We all have those moments when we need to vent emotions. Life isn't always easy and venting our emotions through poetry is a great way to release some of those pent up feelings that keep nagging at us.
Someone needs the rain to cleanse them........
Posted 14 Years Ago
Someone needs the rain to cleanse them........
heart pounding vent
great selection of words
delivered!
Posted 14 Years Ago
heart pounding vent
great selection of words
delivered!
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Added on September 7, 2010
Last Updated on October 9, 2010
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