Without Warmth

Without Warmth

A Poem by Dream Weaver


 

 

He stands alone like an apparition swallowing empty affairs of the heart. Women ridicule him relentlessly cruelly stealing bits and pieces of his enduring trust.

 

For all he had to offer was a wholesome genuine love.

Such an unconditional love, tossed out into the abyss of misfortune untouched by a women’s desire.

 

Still his hopes desires and dreams, circumventing his fears that he shall forever remain cold and without any warmth.

 

His appearance he knows is worn and gaunt but his compassionate soul is that of beauty sincerity and faithfulness

 

His vacant home barely big enough to contain all the tears he will shed, unlucky and misplaced in a life of solitude and obscurity.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Dream Weaver


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a moving piece~ how unfortunate for us all as beings when honest love is displaced for the rough men with curled fists and twists of bitter fate~

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow I really liked this one. Your writing always surprises me in a good way.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


without warmth i feel this guy will diminish in the cold....cold i mean lonely ...lonely cuz i feel this guy is like afraid to love so he thinks about it often and chooses to be alone in solitude in the unknown abyss ....he wont trust enough to be hurt rather assume it will end and not bother....sorry for the babble but i enjoyed myself in these words partly cuz i used to be the same way...

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Posted 13 Years Ago


powerful emotion in these words ... felt and been felt

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 30, 2010
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Dream Weaver
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Paradise, FL



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