Unbelievable

My written words speak stridently

though my voice shriveled and mute.

 

My knowledge is vastly inconsequential

as is my faith in this worlds folly.

 

Desperately divided amid egotistic

exposure and approaching catastrophe.

 

Bereavement of those who believe

this existence is perpetual.

 

One word five syllables comes to mind

           Unbelievable

 

 

  

 

 

Reviews

[Crowley]

This is truly a thinking mans write. I could take in many directions, some of them at the same time. For a short piece it speaks volumes. The seond stanza makes reference to the writers state of mind when it comes to matters of this world and the belief that "really, what am I supposed to believe" may be the course of the day. Great job.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you draw your poetic arrow tightly and let it fly dead center to the bull's eye of reality~

[Immortal1967]

very poignant and relavent . This world needs help and until everyone decides to drop their differences and start working together then I feel that it will only get worse unfortunately. Very good job on this.