Forever you Forever me

Forever you forever me, forever wasn’t

what we thought it would be.

 

Strangers at first consumed by thirst

on the rebound our emotions immersed.

 

With gaping wounds still freshly made,

bleeding hearts sang a consoling serenade.

 

Pining souls reaching out for attention

shedding emotional

layers of misapprehension.

 

Forever you forever me, forever lateral so

beautifully.

 

Rebound romance helps to fill in the void

of a previous commitment unfortunately

destroyed.

 

Afraid of the future we hide from the past

sharing sexual pleasure which we both know

won’t last.

 

But for the moment so beguiling is our need

soon silently drifting until we concede.

 

Forever you forever me, tracing memories  

of heartbreak so indecisively…

 

Reviews

[Beatles9322]

WOW! So beautiful! I really love the diction. :D

[Amy Bumpas]

The picture goes well with this. A emotional affair is what this
poem says to me. Sometimes we need someone to get us through
the rough patches, and sometimes it makes the situation worse.
Good flow my friend..:))

[Seashell]

Bet there are lots of couples just as you described here....One wonders whether it's wise to stay or go.

Liked this one too
Thanks
Babs xx

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you are writing some immensely beautiful pieces of late, whether from personal experiences or not..this is laced with emotion, sadness, regret, longing..impressive work

[Wildfleour]

Make a great song.

[Immortal1967]

this is awesome...flows beautifully and heartfelt, and so true of a lot of rebound romances....great job

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

thats some thing of my past this poem makes me think of it but that is no more was when my husband and i was having marriage problems and i was lost. Nice work

[Robin]

well done my friend, remember any moment, lasts forever, its the light shined and the stretching of the moment that counts .

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sometimes it be that way~ makes me wonder if any couple has ever had a succesful relationship~ like EveR~love on the rebound presented with straightforward allure with all its pleasent pleasures and all its misgiving undertones inherent through your poetic form~

[Elwina]

Very nice flow friend.
Sometimes we just want to close our eyes and drift into something just to fill a hole, and it might just get us a little further through a heartbreak. You described that with the passion and sadness that so fills those moments. Nicely done !