Forever you Forever me

Forever you forever me, forever wasn’t

what we thought it would be.

 

Strangers at first consumed by thirst

on the rebound our emotions immersed.

 

With gaping wounds still freshly made,

bleeding hearts sang a consoling serenade.

 

Pining souls reaching out for attention

shedding emotional

layers of misapprehension.

 

Forever you forever me, forever lateral so

beautifully.

 

Rebound romance helps to fill in the void

of a previous commitment unfortunately

destroyed.

 

Afraid of the future we hide from the past

sharing sexual pleasure which we both know

won’t last.

 

But for the moment so beguiling is our need

soon silently drifting until we concede.

 

Forever you forever me, tracing memories  

of heartbreak so indecisively…

 

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

With gaping wounds still freshly made,
bleeding hearts sang a consoling serenade.

This is very well done, I like it. Sometimes love is not enough, but while it lasts, it's passionate and enthralling, and wonderful!

xxoxx

[Cherrie Palmer]

great use of ryhme and your words flow perfectly, beautiful

[Nancy]

Just like everything else Ive read that you've written, I love this. Unfortunately its true.. :(

[Kaite Seckinger]

This poem is so beautiful! You use such unique words to rhyme with and it makes it interesting to read as well as captivating. One can really feel the pain you're referring to in this powerful piece. I simply adore it, and your talent. I can't wait until you post more. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

the flow of this poem is so smooth and the topic is one of truth. this is done honestly and tastefully. We all have done this at some point in our lives and I am no exception. I'm not perfect and sometimes we get so lonely that we do crazy things to keep from feeling the pain.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Wow... speechless. This piece is very deep. I think it happens so quickly, falling in love, and then before you realize you blink and everything is finished, ended. Wonderful words.

[Gracie-San]

This is written excellently! You've definitely painted the perfect picture of a rebound romance. Wonderful. :)

[china]

Excellent write Scream. I'm feeling the sadness and pain of the rebound romance.

[Ladysue]

so beautiful expressed...i could feel the longing...sad, but so well done...good work...

[Stella]

great.