Forever you Forever me

Forever you forever me, forever wasn’t

what we thought it would be.

 

Strangers at first consumed by thirst

on the rebound our emotions immersed.

 

With gaping wounds still freshly made,

bleeding hearts sang a consoling serenade.

 

Pining souls reaching out for attention

shedding emotional

layers of misapprehension.

 

Forever you forever me, forever lateral so

beautifully.

 

Rebound romance helps to fill in the void

of a previous commitment unfortunately

destroyed.

 

Afraid of the future we hide from the past

sharing sexual pleasure which we both know

won’t last.

 

But for the moment so beguiling is our need

soon silently drifting until we concede.

 

Forever you forever me, tracing memories  

of heartbreak so indecisively…

 

Reviews

[laveen]

reminded me ..some one

[Starbound25]

your wording is wonderful you make me want to write something!

[Cristal Bridges]

You make the loveliest poems out of love. ;) I really enjoyed reading this. almost like song lyrics in a way. Gorgeous work.

[Loner]

U should be crowned with a prize u are out of this world
love this piece in fact what ever u write is a master piece .

[Rosalind Dee]

Rebound romance helps to fill in the void
of a previous commitment unfortunately
destroyed.

so true, so amazingly captured

[J.]

So inevitably sad and Beautiful! This sings a simple story, of so many!

[Sam]

Oh my god, that's beautiful...

[Vanna Renee]

"With gaping wounds still freshly made,
bleeding hearts sang a consoling serenade."
This was beautiful

[KatiePie]

The flow of this was gorgeous, the meaning behind your words. I loved reading this. Thank you for sharing.

[Hustle Consciousness]

i still feel love in these words like it was freshly done.... though as heartbreak creeps back into reality its just a memory of a good time wasted by bad situations .... loving the creativity of word choices and plays !