Serendipity

 

I am lost within this Forrest of false prophecies awakened by resonance ringing pastels of days gone by.

 

Rose petals litter just beyond this beaten path of serenity. Serendipity shall intervene. Draping branches doubting one another exists.

 

 

Fairies and gnomes enchantingly guide you, beside you, but only so far, for it is you your own worst enemy that denies you a satisfying conclusion of what is and what is not?

 

Crystal clear streams cast a reflection of hope only to obstruct my vision, I become flustered how truly poignant we are yet still unresolved…

Reviews

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

this is an ext ream real dream with a deep meaning underlining it, very very nice

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how enchanting..your picture brings the words to life..

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

I like how intricate are your words here. I like the stanza..To be lost within this Forrest of false prophecies

Awakened by resonance ringing pastels of days

gone by...
Deep and so much to learn here.

[Sara Mercury]

"Fairies and gnomes enchantingly guide you but
only so far, for it is you your own worst enemy
that denies you a satisfying revelation."

I think there's a pause between "you" and "your" right?

This verse spoke directly to me; it was like a fireball between the eyes kind of thing.

This poem sounds like one twinflame trying to reach his other half, but to no avail, for she, blinded by her own wishful thinking, is not able to see him there (or to recognise him for who he is to her).

[Liza]

great job with evoking emotions using emoticons :)

[Bubo]

Firstly I LOVE the picture...........and the picture brings your words to life, a fairy tale land of lessons to be learnt, the journey of self discovery. Beautifully written, with images that leave you wondering after having read your poem.

[Amy Bumpas]

Fairy tale like, yet with words of wisdom do appear.
This is a very visual poem and felt I could really see
the forrest, a place to get lost, but one to find yourself.
Nice write!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

cathartic steps forward ~ here enchantment works both to enrapture and to enslave one to the Self~
deeply touching~