Obsession Only

    

                Obsession Only                   

As I watch you from the corner of my mind, time stands silently still.

your grace and eloquence, propel me beyond rational thinking, each

breath you take launches me into this euphoric yet tranquil condition.

 

Your every move recorded on a daily basis, from your early morning

shower till you lay naked in slumber. I have watched your intimate

sessions as you playfully touch yourself, I become aroused knowing

the pleasure you inflict upon each part of your sensuous body.

 

 

I know each scent that you wear, a different one for each day, yes you

know the one that I love. I watch you shop for naughty lingerie, so small

sheer quite revealing, I begin to sweat profusely. I can taste you my love

though we never made contact, I’m in you all over you, having my way

with you…I know your sweet a*s feels me too…

 

 

 On a wind swept night as you lie asleep in your beautiful nakedness,

I stand over you with anticipation quietly awaiting your approval…

I know you adore me as my hardness grows, you sluggishly open your

bloodshot eyes to acknowledge my existence, You scream in terror…

What’s wrong my love, do you not know me, hush now darling, you

 

 wouldn’t want to wake the neighbors…

                 I love you... 

 

 

Author's Note

This poem does not by any means reflect on my personal character...lol

Reviews

[Twizzler]

SO creepy and thrilling...this is awesome!

[Dream Weaver]

Thanks very much Twizzler, creepy indeed... :)

[Marie Harrison]

Oh...I think I recognize your gaze from afar, the wide-eyed stalker of the night! I agree with Linda Marie, I liked the stike out too. Made me curious, as to what you changed. Interesting write. It drew me in.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

creepy stalker...
dangerous stalker...
Loving stalker...
oooo..o.O

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I like the strikethroughs - subconscious surfacing like silent waves to tease the reader. From voyeuristic fantasy to sinister stalker, you weave a sinful and titillating tale. I like it, but this in no way reflects my personal character either. LOL!

[Sara Mercury]

*clears throat before speaking, whilst carefully selecting the correct words*

This sounds like the man I've known from the etheric world that I've been experiencing this way since I was around 14 ... lol

[Seashell]

ye.....I soooo believe your author's note....tee heee....Anyway...t'was a delight to read such a commitment to another, such detail of your preferences was appealing and cute. Maybe it should be over 18's tho !
Loved this exciting piece...mmmm

Thanks
Babs xx

[Leah Everett]

Haha, I do love it.
I love it for how weird it is, it's full of sexuality and terror, it's brilliant.
And you chose your words perfectly!
Keep 'em coming! ;)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

oh how you twisted it!!!~ lol from a silken texture of intimate voyeur who is welcomed into glimpses of implied silk slides to the predatory splash of cold reality turned inside out~ deliciousy sinister and creepy~
and your author's note . . . LOL!

[PadfootBlack]

Interesting. Slightly creepy, and rather stalker-ish, but interesting and well-written. Lol.