About you

  The sky was exceptionally

      blue today.

 Every thought was          

 

     of you today.     

  Each step that I took     

  every second look  

  were always about          

       you today!
         

    Today was not       

     like any other
        
         day.
        
        In fact it

    was much better
                
     then yesterday.              

Reviews

[Snapdragon]

Very different from the other two I just read. It's softer and hopeful. Wonderful write.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great cheery short write..That grabbed my attention and held it..Sunflower

[Angel's Lady]

Absolutely love it!

[Ladysue]

This was so endearing...sweet and lovely...It made me smile...

[Katie]

Simple, yet somehow I think everyone knows this feeling- or I hope they do. Love the rhyming and the flow also.

[Cassiopia Summers]

This write is adorable, it made me smile even though I am angered right now. Thanks. (: It really is a great write. Short, sweet, and simple.

[Jamie S.]

Short, sweet and endearing, it would melt my heart if I recieved it. Nice writing :)

[Amy Bumpas]

Thoughts of someone dear...hopefully it would always get better.
These first lines really sets the rest of the poem off.. The sky was exceptionally

blue today.

Every thought was



of you today.

In these stanzas: every second look

were always about

you today!
(instead of using were always, it might read better as
was)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lustrous sweet elegance ~ every line like a cup of sweet ambrosia~ every line an embrace~ beautiful~

[Celestial Being]

romance and love oozing out .. beautiful :)