About you

  The sky was exceptionally

      blue today.

 Every thought was          

 

     of you today.     

  Each step that I took     

  every second look  

  were always about          

       you today!
         

    Today was not       

     like any other
        
         day.
        
        In fact it

    was much better
                
     then yesterday.              

Reviews

[Liza]

easy to relate to
uplifting
sentimental
simple
profound
rhythmic :)

[Shy Girl]

This was a very nice uplifting poem. I liked it very much...it's almost like you were just thinking and musing out lout of just the simple sight you enjoy everyday. You don't even have to be talking about a person here. It could just simply be and object that hold great emotion over you and is a consistant presence...like a favorite place or even your pet. Many different directions to take this piece. Though you probably did mean a special person in your life...I may be reading more into this poem than you ment...got lost in all the posibilites of your words... :)

[Mockingbird]

swept me off my feet.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Very possitive, which is alway's good to look to something better. Nicely done

[Misty Blue Eyes]

aww i like this poem

[AlieahRose]

THIS IS SO TOUCHING...
LIKE...
MY HEART WAS BEATING SO STEADY...
THAT I FELT LIKE I WAS DREAMING...
THIS WAS INCREDIBLE...

[Sam]

It makes a lot of sense to me. I like it a lot!

[My Fair Lady]

Everything looks sweeter with you in it. :)

[Magdelena]

Short sweet, and says it all. I liked the constant rhythm in this..

Mags xx

[CLosed]

Oh this is a very sweet write, short but fits everything it needs in.
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