Enraptured Voyage

Re-edited

 

Author's Note

Just a theory....

Reviews

[Loner]

I love whatever u write!!!!!!!!

[MusicMartyrs]

"So often we are mislead to
believe that this aura
comes but once in a lifetime"
i strongly agree, i do not believe there is only one person meant for everyone

[heich]

wow..you are very good kuya..i cant write stuffs like that effectively...it is a great theory..

[54321]

very nice!

[NCSsworld]

i believe this theory, it makes me think :)

[Gracie-San]

I liked the theory that you posed in this poem, it makes one really think.

I guess what I'm trying to say is, I really liked this poem. Good write.

[bbb]

I really like this theory. I do believe most people, (but not everybody, technically speaking) are entitled to it. It truly is "from within..." I believe as well. Nice job:)

[Fran Marie]

Suddenly you find you’re
inhaling natures
most perfect contribution,
the aroma of romance

So true; indeed mankind will always seek out love/romance

C`est la vie`~ a lovely poem my friend

[Cassiopia Summers]

The theory of this poem is true, "yet we covet the belief everyone is entitled to it, no matter how long the voyage" True true so very true. This here is a great poem. Good write my friend.

[Dinesh Sairam]

'Romance' is a false emotion, according. More of an adulterated form of pure love. And I don't think "Everyone is entitled to it". There are some very poor souls who follow their life wherever the wind goes. they devour over even trying to barely exist. Nevertheless, I liked your write. A different poem :)