Enraptured Voyage

Re-edited

 

Author's Note

Just a theory....

Reviews

[Ruth]

You have a way with words that leaves me fulfilled and yet wanting more xoxo

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Poppy, that color is invading my cheeks again ;) xo

[Ruth]

My goodness...twice in one day? Woot lol

[Dream Weaver]

Must be that voice of your ;) xo

[Ruth]

Ok..now tis me flushed LOL

[Dream Weaver]

Ah Ha! The shoe is on the other foot lol xo

[Ruth]

lol ♥

[Seashell]

Is it not just theeee best experience in the world ? I don't think there could be anything to beat it !! I do wish it could be visible... I think it would look like a firework of pure gold balloons with red hearts shooting sparkles up to the sky before melting down to earth in a rainbow river, then turning to gold dust..falling on our heads, blinding our eyes and making us dizzy and stunned...but ohhh so happy and content !! haaaaa.
Thanks for stimulation...bet you wish you hadn't bothered..lol... xo
And yes of course..EVERY single ONE is entitled to feel it...to capture it...even if just once !!

[Dream Weaver]

Ah Lass, I like your description better than mine! xo

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is beautifully written! again I love how you designed this piece! The words spoke of a voyage that most take in their hearts of hearts to find that soul mate, and some long for it but never get to experience it at all! So well written!

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Kathy, a almost never ending voyage for sure...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Welcome!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful verse, sensual and loving thoughts penned very well. xoxoxo

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Neva, xoxo

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

much depth and very deep. nice work god bless

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem and it has a depth to it. I believe that we can love other people in our life but we will know when that one special person comes our way. I have loved since I found and lost that person, of my own doing, and wish everyday I wouldn't have left him but I know we can love again. It just isn't as deep or as connecting. Great write. I love how you expressed what you felt in this poem without holding back. The words you used in this poem are perfect. Nicely done.

[Cristal Bridges]

I think that this is so true. I know I believe it, that there's someone out there waiting paitently for me like I am for them. I totally think that's true and like you say I think that everyone should have that love that experience at least once in their lives. I like this a lot it is a most true message. Lovely.

[Sara Mercury]

Soul mate love always begins in complete turmoil (as in the opposite energies in conflict), and sometimes ends as it began. But every once in a great while, the time is right to meet them in the earthly existence. And I truly feel that it is meant to happen only in ONE lifetime. This kind of love is that rare.

[Amy Bumpas]

This to me is speaking of soul mates, but I am a
hopeless romantic LOL! Your words are beautiful and
yet romantic once again. Love the picture that goes
with this.

[emmajoy]

Feeling, emotions just erupt: passion is like inhaling a beautifully scented flower .. it fills the mind, the body .. but, in spite of leaving a deeply rooted memory another scent can be as inviting. Only the heart tells which or what is the lasting one.

A thoughtful post, an inviting post .. words to consider.