Phenominal Bliss

 

My love for you is unparalleled, a solar flare burning white hot as you gaze so amorously. A reflection incisively into the zenith of my very existence I adore.

 

Your radiance casts enviable hunger in ways without resistance, I must yield to every impulse every breath becomes you,

I am found.

 

Adoration flowing from every aperture that makes me who I am, it’s you who refreshes my fatigue and peripheral nature to the point of phenomenal bliss.

 

Sensually poignant in the heat of erotic passion we flourish with every stroke, momentous in our endeavor to achieve perfection our magnificence divine.

Reviews

[Seashell]

Waw....such powerful love is obvious here. Very nicely put together to create a masterpiece.
Heyyy. Your guitar work is also WAWWWWW !!

Thanks for share
Babsie Bee xx

[Fran Marie]

A beautiful passionate piece of writimg ~
Quite lovely in its poetic verse and expression

Nice Job on this onE!!


Very Nice!!

[Loner]

Excellent!!!!

[deeps]

Very well written write and passionate

[bbb]

This is more sensually charged than most things I read and review--a little different for me. However I am not saying anything negative here. This is a well-constructed write, with with really detailed description, good word usage.

[Cassiopia Summers]

As always, I love the poem, I love this poem. (: Great write my friend.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

gorgeous daulity braiding in a phenomenally illustrated dance of words~

[Kiddx]

this is wonderful & beautiful

[Leanne Conway]

Wow! That is amazingly beautiful. I fell inlove with this poem. Suck graceful words that fit perfectly together. Beautiful poem hon.