Ferocious

Ferocious

A Poem by Dream Weaver


 

 
















Scared and shivering in this fetal position
I need some time to complete this transition. These four walls like bars on a cage, fit to be tied suppressing this rage.

Crimson fog hides the moonlit sky, yet still the metamorphic process will not be denied. Avoid the moss on this blood thirsty night for it is I you fear when you turn off the light.

Predatory blood rushes through my veins, come morning light trailed by grisly remains. Be aware of what has yet to be, when the beast is awakened it’s no longer me.

 

The hunger ferocious, as I lay here in wait, it’s not I but him who will determine your fate?

© 2013 Dream Weaver


Author's Note

Dream Weaver
Yes another Werewolf theme.

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Be aware of what has yet to be, when
the beast is awakened it’s no longer me.

I really like this one a lot. Just watched a werewolf movie. The above lines represent the struggle the wolf and the man (lost somewhere inside) had in the movie. He was about to kill the woman he loved. Perhaps I'll sit down long enough to write about werewolves. Nice write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yay!! The first review is all mine. (: Haha. Anyways.

1.I love werewolves.
2.The transition between his human self, and the predator is amazing, example "The hunger ferocious, as I lie in wait It's not I but him who will determine your Fate."
3.I love how you capitalized Fate, to me it says that it isn't just a simple nameless thing like so many believe, but something more properly placed.

I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 5, 2010
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Dream Weaver
Dream Weaver

Paradise, FL



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