Sterile

A taste of a brain freeze otherwise known as writers block. This could happen to you?

Thinking aloud my thoughts   
In peril, my judgment is
clouded my ideas are sterile.

Wanting more but getting
less, in a world so tragic my
life is a mess.

Tittering on the brink of
disaster out of control and
spiraling faster!

Many questions with answers
well hidden, must I challenge
all that has been forbidden?

 

Lunacy would be the next to

follow, free of this world

stone cold and hallow.

Reviews

[Lovely Lady]

Love the picture! but the writing is classic... Love it
~♥~

[Poetic Beauty]

Wow, this is a deep though. We all have unanswered questions and some of those are best left unanswered. You project your feelings and thoughts onto this paper clearly and the picture of a lonely man who is out of control is in my mind. great descriptive write.

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is sooo very true. I have had one bad session of writersblock lately and today, BAM!! A couple ideas, well many more than a couple just start flooding through my head as if a faucet had been turned on. (: I love how this write could indeed happen to anyone.

[Dana Kathryn]

WOW,Now that is a melancholy write :PI do know it well my self..I finally got a flooding of thought after the day i had yesterday,pls Check out my new poem,The Great Awakening...Maybe it may bring you some inspiration... lol ,ya never know :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like it, "Lunacy would be the next to follow, free of this world stone cold and hollow"- this line is awesome. (":

[Dream Weaver]

OUCH!!!! ;o)

[MusicMartyrs]

that looks painful ;)
i like this concept...very intriguing