In Love

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With you, I am invincible, knowledgeable gracious endearing indestructible .

Without you I'm vulnerable indecisive misplaced in a labyrinth of tedious deception.

With you, I have the courage of a hundred men courageous virtuous heroic victorious.

Without you, I cower in the shadows of a tumultuous hell, bending twisting whirling in a pool of despair.

With you, life is worth every precious breath, every waking moment impervious to failure.

Without you life truly does not exist! Emptiness reigns,

overwhelming me to the point of despondency .

With you, every spectrum of passionate being revolves solely around you.

Without you, gray hues bleed irrational musings of an inconsolable loss.

Reviews

[Bubo]

Lovely strong love poem, with great imagary!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Oh to be in love................such a lovely poem!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

an engaging ode to lover~ lovely visuals throughout~

[Liza]

nice composition and dedication
it can be considered an honor for one
and probably a burden for another
imagine the pressure
imagine the glory
this triggered both emotions
but this is a great write

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

WY illustrates how life really means something when you have your soulmate by your side. Sharing, encouraging, finding strength and living moment to moment is a great philosphy to live by ... and it's doubly delicious when you have that special someone ... That 1st verse is visually inspiring .. Good job! GBU

[Kitten]

Interesting subject. I wonder who you are talking about...

I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for writing.

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I like your flow, uncomplicated and beautifully written

[Kiddx]

i like the expressions of emotion you enterwine. Lovely written.